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RE: Let's make a deal [my entry to Finish the Story Contest - Week #43!]
All that tablet tipping for just a single arrow! Well, thinking about it the result was worth it. I enjoyed how Kalliska played with the colonel like the cat with the mouse. Just try to correct some typos and the story will be great and flow like silk (being myself a non-native English speaker like you, allow me to suggest you Grammarly. It does miracles). Keep it up!
I have to quit using Google's help in translations.
Go for Grammarly trust me 😉