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RE: Even The Clouds Smile (A Finish The Story Entry)
Vickyyyyyyy!!! She should have never left the grip... and now we know that those bloody cumuloids are not so entirely innocent. Probably this is the first of a number of other episodes.. You know, I crafted the story with an essential style but the trick is in how to end it .. you managed to be original and your anaphoric rythm in the scene was brilliant.