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RE: Leitner - Week #46 of Finish the Story
the format regarding the dialog was confusing. You should consider using the standard "dialog markers" to make it easier for the reader.
I didn't expect to see Knauffman, that knavish financier! Of course he'd try to expel the Leitners of their darkness. But what a sorry attempt, and he got what he deserved.
I will take into account the standar dialogue markers for the future, thank you for pointing it out.
I'm glad you like how the kauffman rascal gets what he deserves.