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RE: The Package (Finish The Story #49 Entry)
He stared at the sculpture, the carved wood, the wrought iron; the classic huntress, her slain deer slung over her shoulder.
Dianna, huh? cool. i get the metaphor of it all, I think.
Also that last line in the ending, so she's making the art and they think its some precious stuff?
I really enjoyed the instant time jump. you alert this to the reader immediately, so the story moved naturally from there. and the central question of "what is the THING that they want?" kept me reading.
nice read!
Ahhh very well spotted, I was sat with my uncle who is an artist, and was stopping me to show me his huntress goddess sketches, I didn't think anyone would get that little easter egg so to speak lol
Yep, that's it exactly, or at least the boss does, not sure if his men share his view, but doubt anyone would question him ;)
Aww thank you, that means a lot coming from you, I know this plot didn't carry for a lot of people, but at least the hook and reel worked, and you wouldn't say it if it didn't <3