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RE: Young John, Adrift in a Pirate Ship: Finish the Story Contest #35
I was drawn into this story through your character. He was trapped, and in a desperate situation, and his personality was intriguing: not a master, not a weakling, but full of potential. Wanting to see where that potential would go, is what made me continue reading.
Thank you, @dirge. Not a dynamic story, but I'm glad you liked the character. I cared about him, and I guess that came through.