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RE: Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #32! My Entry

in #finishthestory6 years ago

Ooo I really like this one! The ending is great, he may have pulled her into it, but, she has very much taken to it! There is a fair bit left hanging, (which isn't a bad thing) the ending works really well, picking up on a subtle detail and weaving it through out to tie it up.

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