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RE: Letter Again [my entry to Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #41

in #finishthestory6 years ago

A true detective who knows better than to wrack his mind trying to force a solution, but instead turns it over until it comes together.You play into the back ground of the character really well, showing his experience through this actions, and i really like that it is another letter. I wonder where the maid would have led him, if she hadn't been got to first. The well planned actions of the detective and Belinda in the first half, that you then pull through in your second half, makes for a perfect contrast to the accident in the end. No matter how much effort they may have both gone to, her ultimate fate was one neither of them had seen coming - it just works so well. An ending filled with intrigue and mystery, carrying the details from the freest half, and setting a new tone for a second half. Very glad to have you aboard!

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