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RE: The Road Home: Finish the Story Contest #44

in #finishthestory6 years ago

Loved this beautiful tale of Ren turning over a new leaf! Your clever inclusion of Liu's 'power' tattoo worked perfectly on two levels. To the deceased street fighter, it likely symbolized his strength and superiority against his opponents. But through your story, the tattoo could also be taken as a sign to Ren that he had the power to change his life, to redeem his soul despite past transgressions.

The respect that you had Ren show his former enemy, to struggle through carrying Yuan's corpse back after vowing to care for his family, was a perfect way to show his resolve in keeping to his resolutions.

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Thank you! I'm glad you got the power tattoo... a little piece I inserted to amuse myself, but felt no one would bother to check out. Just like, the two pictures--first one drab, second one full of life and hope. It amuses me to do stuff that may mean nothing to anyone besides me :)
Thanks for your kind comment. Redemption and growth were the only places I personally could take such a thoughtful beginning.

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