The moon tried to leave, struggling against the great clouds that surrounded and covered
That's a wonderful line. Throughout the story you create this atmosphere of gloom. We can feel the death around us. Very well done.
The moon tried to leave, struggling against the great clouds that surrounded and covered
That's a wonderful line. Throughout the story you create this atmosphere of gloom. We can feel the death around us. Very well done.
agreed. I liked the atmosphere of this story
Thanks @agmoore, for your visit in my blog. I 'm so happy you liked my story.