This was definitely written for the screen. I have to see this action. Because I know you can see it.
Huang jumped from the floor to the wall and then ran atop a flying piece of metal.
How much more visual can a piece be? There is so much energy here. You're right...it must be continued.
One thing about your pieces: the reader is never bored :)
I'm happy to know that my writing keeps you awake.
I had so much more in my head that didn't fit into the limit this round.
What a wonderful problem you have. Too many ideas!! Most people are struggling to come up with ideas, but ideas come to you like flashes in a storm. Your challenge will always be to direct them, but never tame them.
Have fun!
Can't agree more @agmoore!