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RE: Why Build Finally Network?

Thanks for taking a look at the post. I'll take a look at the recommend template before working on another update post.

Speaking of the previous post. As this is clearly a series, it should have a link to that post. Without it, this post is a bit confusing.

Thanks, will make it more clear which posts are relevant.

One thing that interests me, as someone who has a website, is static areas. Stuff like "about" and "contact" that shouldn't be pushed down as new posts come in. I hope that's something you're working on. In the previous post, you mentioned "portfolio posts," but that seems to be about recent posts.

Static areas (when ready) will be static as expected

In the previous post, you mentioned "portfolio posts," but that seems to be about recent posts.

"Portfolio" will be a new style of theme. Extra options will be added to display content via

  • latest posts
  • selecting X number of previous posts individually to be displayed.
  • selecting a specific hashtag

The post had some issues of style and grammar, and I would recommend working to clean those up in future posts in the series. You're presenting a major new dApp, and want the presentation to be as effective as possible. I'm happy to provide specific examples in a follow-up comment if wanted.

Yes please, if you have suggestions feel free to let me know.

Thanks again 🚀

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Here are some examples of sentences that could have been better:

  • "It’s important to be clear with the intention behind this project from the start and share my reasoning and ideas behind creating this platform." Two issues here. First, it badly needs a comma before "and." Also, I would write "clear about," not "clear with."

  • "The solutions to these problems should be the guide to creating this platform." This is just a clunky sentence. How about: "The solutions to these problems should serve as a guide in creating this platform."?

  • "If the problems aren’t worth solving then perhaps the platform is not worth creating?" Comma before "then." Or even instead of "then."

  • "I believe If the Steem network wants to grow it needs to be a more integral part of a creators platform." A few issues. "I believe that if" work better. There should be a comma before "it." "Creators" should be "creators'"

These are just examples. The biggest takeaway is that if you would make a short pause while saying a sentence, you should probably put a comma there when you write it.

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