RE: Why Build Finally Network?
Here are some examples of sentences that could have been better:
"It’s important to be clear with the intention behind this project from the start and share my reasoning and ideas behind creating this platform." Two issues here. First, it badly needs a comma before "and." Also, I would write "clear about," not "clear with."
"The solutions to these problems should be the guide to creating this platform." This is just a clunky sentence. How about: "The solutions to these problems should serve as a guide in creating this platform."?
"If the problems aren’t worth solving then perhaps the platform is not worth creating?" Comma before "then." Or even instead of "then."
"I believe If the Steem network wants to grow it needs to be a more integral part of a creators platform." A few issues. "I believe that if" work better. There should be a comma before "it." "Creators" should be "creators'"
These are just examples. The biggest takeaway is that if you would make a short pause while saying a sentence, you should probably put a comma there when you write it.