'Better Left Unsaid ' Signed a Re-write Screenwriter to Sample!

in #filmmaking4 years ago

Hi Everyone! We've signed Nerio Bernardi to re-write a couple of scenes for 'Better Left Unsaid' I've attached a link following for two of those selected - scenes 33 and 35. I deleted scene 34 because it was not part of the same scene set-up as 33 and 35.

Once we have the rewrite, I'll share it with you to see if the re-write has improved the screenplay... or not. Keep in mind we are looking to develop character through dialogue AND to not be overly commercial - Moonlight compared to Fast and Furious as a bad example.

https://1drv.ms/b/s!AkUvccKPZGP5g_xKyXG388vo9ted4Q

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