50 Word Story Contest Week #23 - It called

in #fiftywords • 7 years ago (edited)

IT CALLED

Dad said it’s okay, that the bogeyman wasn’t real.

Sleep.

He doesn’t get it. No.

I'm not scared of the bogeyman. What I’m scared of sits right on my bed.

The gift from the witches tent at the circus.

Its neck slowly turning, a taunting, haunting voice calls.

“Junior......... “

Allo! So this is my entry for the fifty word contest, heard about it from a Steemian, @ogochukwu, he shared the link. Uhmmm, I hope you like it. Please upvote and comment too. Thanks guys!

Image credit of course goes to Google

#voice #fiction #writing #story
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     7 years ago 

    This would have been far better if you dropped the chucky bit

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       7 years ago 

      Hmm, I guess so, originality and stuff. Thank you

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         7 years ago 

        I don't know if the contest allows editing though, it's worth a shot I guess. Thanks again

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