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RE: Just like Daddy - A Fifty Words Story
Great story. I would have prefered if you chose a different picture though because it made clear to me what the "toy" was before I even started reading. Thank you for sharing this story :)
Thanks a million for stopping by @yoganarchista. You know something, you are right, the picture certainly gave it away, but I was quite struck by the photo and opted to use it for that reason. I agree though, it prob would have worked better with a different less obvious picture... Thanks for the constructive criticism though - much appreciated :o)