Capture a feeling and an idea in just fifty words is, with out a doubt, a challenge. To me you did it pretty well actually. Of course, we [the authors] are never satisfied with our own results, we always look for more and to get better and better, that's what really matter at the end.

I really liked what you did at the start of the writing, naming the posibles names that the main character thought for his story, really nice touch and very original. Hope to read more from you @clacrax. Have a great time writing!