Chase -- 50-word Story

in #fiftywords6 years ago


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@jayna challenges everybody to write a story in 50 words. Challenge accepted!

Catch Me If You Can

“Catch me if you can!” Amy yelled as she bolted across the yard.

Jane laughed and chased. Her long legs closed the gap quickly and she leapt on Amy’s back. They tumbled forward, laughing as they rolled.

Amy tried to squirm away but Jane pinned her down.

“Gotcha!” she shouted.

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A very sweet story, @vdux, Thanks!

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Thank you!

The fun and games of childhood... You captured the fun and innocence very well here, great job..

Miss those days...

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Nice! Kids do love to chase one another. Seems like Jane is getting the upper hand in this game!

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