Lost in the darkness - in fifty words
This is not a forest, but a tomb.
She is not afraid, she is past fear now. She is only tired.
Vultures are joyfully laughing, the feast is near.
Her eyes closed for the last time.
This is my entry for the #fiftywords contest hosted by @jayna and @miniature-tiger
Image source:
https://pixabay.com/en/scary-eerie-spooky-dark-fog-666620/
Kratko, efektno, covek vidi celu sliku u glavi. Uhvati te jeza. "This not a forest, but a tomb".. brrrr. :) A ujedno i realno. Bravo! :) Jesi nadaren, svaka ti cast! :)
Zato san se i ogranicia na 50 rici, dajos vise ne priplasin ljude koji citaju hahaaha
That was dark, but well written @ spalatino
Thank you. You cannot know light without darkness :)
Very true my friend
Odličan! Stvorio si super atmosferu u samo 50 riječi :)
Ma za iduci cilj ce mi bit stvorit atmosferu u još manje riječi, haha
That was wonderful, thank you for sharing! :) (I love "dark" writings.)
Thank you
Concise but intriguing.
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a forest is a fitting place for bones
Now, that is a powerful line, right there
Dark, yet poetic. Wonderfully written little tale.
Thank you. In the forest named Darkwood, the feel of the read is bound to be dark
Spooky and intense, amazing as always. You have an equally good talent with short ones as you do with longer stories.
Thank you. Both are challenging in their own way. In the end I always feel I need more words to truly express myself
I have to remember to avoid Darkwood forest. Nicely done!
Thqnk you. Name itself is a good hint :)