50 Word Story Contest Week #14 Hafif Gemi/Light Ship
(Source @sighmanjestah--Hafif Gemi/Light Ship)
I learned about this contest from the following post:
My story is dedicated to @ogretmen a new Steemian from Turkey who is a teacher. He posted his introduceyourself in Turkish, English and Spanish. I've increased my Turkish vocabulary as ogretmen=teacher in English. Please check it out if interested.
https://steemit.com/introduceyourself/@ogretmen/hello-steemit-merhaba-hola-mundo-or-or-introduce
Thanks @ogretmen for inspiring this submission and thanks to literature-trail for sponsoring it.
My submission is titled
Haifa Gemi/Light Ship
O buradan itibaren değil.
Kör eden ışığı uzaktan gördük.
Bu ne? Nereden geldi?
I opened my eyes, hearing the strange words.
Someone was bending over me.
Where am I?
The ship?
What happened?
I opened my eyes, feeling the light caress of my wife.
I closed my eyes, ......not here.
Edit 1 title change
Edit 2 the rest of the title change, duh
Hi! Would you mind checking if you exceeded the 50-word limit? It would be a shame if this entry would be disqualified based due to technicality. Let me know by replying here once you made the changes. Thanks!
Hello @jedau, I am sorry, maybe I've misunderstood the directions? I count 50 words? Does the word count include the title? If so then it would be 54? Can you tell me the number you come up with. Thanks 🙏.
I counted 51 earlier, but maybe it was my mistake. In any case, carry on. I've graded this nonetheless. Best of luck!
Thank you.
Don't mention it! :)
well done; bravo!
Thank you