The value of people - fifty word stories

in #fiftywords • 6 years ago

4 years sitting in the same class.
4 years trying to get his attention.
I felt invisible, not even a smile.

Does he know that I exist?
Should I exist?
What’s the point?

Lying in the bath looking at the blade.
All it would have taken was a simple wave.

#story #fiction #love #writing
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     6 years ago 

    I really like this one.

    Well written.

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     6 years ago 

    Thanks. That means a lot.

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     6 years ago 

    What a tremendous, captivating little bit of something you got there. Upvoted & followed
    @originalworks

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     6 years ago 

    Thank you. Thats brilliant feedback and i really appreciate it.

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       6 years ago 

      Dark 50 word story. I enjoyed the finality in such a short format

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       6 years ago 

      Sometimes a bit of darkness is needed. That's the way life is.

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         6 years ago 

        Damn. Someone has no chill. Thats just in 50 words aswell. Top quality work.

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         6 years ago 

        Thats why i love the format. You really need to think about how you phrase every word.

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           6 years ago 

          This is really well written and powerful to read. Nice work!

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           6 years ago 

          Thanks. Wasnt really paying attention when i wrote it bit when i read it back it really hit me. Love this piece.

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             6 years ago 

            A very intense little story that reads like a poem! Wow. Nicely done.

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