50-word Short Story Contest: Journey
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Eyes closed against the harsh sun and stuck together from the salty spray. I can hear faint cries of pain and suffering from the others but my head is too heavy to lift. Not long left to go now, one way or another. A better life or death awaits ahead.
A fifty words story by niallon11.
Quick and impactful. The point where you are ready to let nature take its course.
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It must be a tough decision to even take the journey in the first place. Facing into the unknown and possible death.
A hard reality that occurs every day. Good short story.
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It's something a lot of people are going through right now alright.
Great story, @niallon11. You've captured an ongoing human tragedy from the perspective of one person. Very powerful!
Thanks for the feedback.
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Well done drama.
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