A Rite of Passage | #fiftywords

in #fiftywords5 years ago (edited)

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“He – he doesn’t have the gift.”

Brows deeply furrowed, Father muttered disbelievingly. “Nonsense! He has legendary wizards' blood in him.”

With a flick of Father’s long fingers, stuffed turkey in a cast iron skillet flew at lightning speed towards my chest.

“No!” Mother gasped in horror. I could only duck.

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So I decided to interpret the prompt "gift" differently, in the sense of a natural ability or talent, for this micro-fiction piece. I also threw in some turkey for the festive mood (;

But more seriously, I hope this piece highlights the burdens parents often place on their children, to live up to their expectations - at times to the extent of denying reality. The consequences can be really disastrous.

Have you experienced this in your life?

Resteems and upvotes are appreciated, but even more so are your thoughts! Please leave a comment below, I would love to hear from you!

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Well done, @joeylim. Yes, there are many interpretations of the word "gift," aren't there? I love this little view into the world of wizards, and the relationship of the three members of the family. Thank you for the additional backstory. I always love it when writers share their thought process!

Appreciate your comments lots @jayna! 😊 Yeahh decided to do something different this round.

Looking forward to more prompts 😊

I love how the turkey turned into a duck. Very clever. :-)

@blockurator thanks so much hehe! (;

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