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RE: IN THE NIGHT SKY / A Fifty Word Short Story
Ohhh FAIR! I thought you would write something about equality haha! This was surprisingly terrifying. I don't what's so unnerving about heights, but they really make my skin crawl. Nice story, man!
Thanks, I wanted to put the narrator in a position of great visibility, a part of the scene but one with a unique vantage point. I wanted to trap him with no means of escape.
Exactly how I like my fiction!