Wow. Nice first story, @wems. It's a moment we can't experience until it is too late to describe it to anyone, so we can only wonder. I had a feeling of peace, when reading this, and imagined the person passing on is enjoying some memories before kissing life goodbye.
Peace! Exactly what I was aiming for. I wanted people to know that even when our loved ones passed on and it all about tears and sadness...There's that moment that we can't take away from them and it comes with peace. Thanks for the comment @jayna