RE: Dream Runner by Anonymummy_Fifty Word Challenge
Hi @anonymummy. Thanks for joining the 50-word challenge. There are a few things I'd like to mention:
This is a 50-word challenge. I don't generally count the words because I'm not a big stickler on that detail. But your post is over 150 words so it's really not in the spirit of the challenge. (I have a recommendation below.)
Are you quite certain these are your images?
And just one more thing. I do highly encourage that people edit their work before posting. An occasional typo isn't a terrible thing, but for example, you have at least three spellings of the word "she'll" which is problematic, and suggests that you wrote it somewhat carelessly. The 50-word challenge is about writing a very tight, well-written story in 50 words. There are quite a few other grammatical and punctuation problems as well.
Writing fast is a great way to draft a story, but it's the editing that makes it readable, and a worthwhile experience for your readers.
I like the ideas behind this post. Nightmares are terrible, and many people can relate.
Please consider writing a series of three 50-word posts by breaking this one out into three 50-word segments. It's actually fine if you post them all this week for the "run" prompt. There's no hurry to write these posts. You have a whole week.
Cheers.
I definitely think the photo montage is using pirated images. Top right looks a bit like Kristen Stewart.
You are right @rhondak I was stupid! I was too busy being creative myself that I forgot we make money of f of our posts! I have altered my post and clarified that this picture uses multiple sources please forgive me I have unflagged you I hope you will do the same you are also wiser than me. I shall follow you and I hope we can be friends.
Top right is Bella Cullen's transformation during Twilight: Breaking Dawn pt 1. Bottom right is a screengrab from Breaking Dawn pt. 2. The woman running away can be found as far back as 2015, such as in this post. Again, it looks like a screen grab from a movie, I just can't find which one. In fact, if you do and image search on Google for 'woman running away', it's the top result.
You are right. And I am wrong! As @apsu has pointed out to me we make money off our posts! And I know that that means even if the pic is a remix or whatever I still have to state all the sources used. And so I have altered my posts to state this. I have also unflagged you I muted you and followed you! We should always look up to those wiser than ourselves @gmuxx and you are wiser than I
My flag was just to draw your attention to the issue. I am glad you have seen your error and I will now remove that flag. Best of luck to you.