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RE: #Fiftywords: Backyard (Tiny Story)
Wow, this is powerful. It puts us right there in that dramatic situation. Well done.
Wow, this is powerful. It puts us right there in that dramatic situation. Well done.
I tried to put as much action as I could because I read you said in your post:
I'm not sure I succeeded (I don't have any resolution here,) but your comment now made me feel really happy.