The hunter - Fifty word story challenge

in #fiftywords6 years ago


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After waiting 3 hours without moving. His target appeared in front of his eyes. A great deer. He aimed his rifle and pulled the hammer. He was ready to pull the trigger; suddenly, he heard when a branch broke behind him. Unfortunately the hunter became a prey, too.



This is my entry for @jayna's Fifty word story

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The circle of life!! The hunter is hunted...

That's right!

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Nice little twist at the end @jadams2k18

The best way to catch a prey is when it is distracted hunting another.

Doh! Better stop killing animals for fun.

Hi my dear friend @vdux! Thanks for passing by... That's funny

You keep on rocking it, j!

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Oh my! Don’t look now, but you are about to become lunch! Very clever story, @jadams2k18.

Yeah! hahaha... Hi again! my dear @jayna

Hi @jadams2k18, great story, you managed to keep me in suspense and make a plot twist in just fifty words :)

All the best

Thanks my dear @crypto.piotr. I'm glad you liked it.

Are you interested in hunting @jadams2k18 ?

Hello my dear friend! Im not interested at all. That's a story I heard from some hunters, in the Amazon jungle.

yeah I found it quite surprissing. somehow I cannot imagine you being big fan of hunting my dear @jadams2k18 :D

yours, Piotr

You are right. I do not like to kill animals. But I'm no vegetarian .

I like to eat chicken and hamburgers.

There's some post I made a long time ago, about a hunter who stop being a hunter. And I made almost a book about it. But I haven't finished it ... yet

Saludos amigo!

chicken rocks! :D

Fried Chickeeeen!!!

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