50 word Story Contest Week #17 SophistreesteemCreated with Sketch.

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Green, edible, lumpy apples adorn the squat tree. Maurice plucks one. He examines its pockmarks and scars. He finds no sign of rot. It's just a wild fruit, maybe a bit unripe. The sour juice puckers his lips, and he quivers. The tree becomes a man. Maurice becomes a tree.

Learned of the contest by looking at the "hot" tab for the "contest" tag, saw this post: https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@ogochukwu/the-fifty-word-story-contest-seventeen-weeks-of-fun-and-counting-join-for-a-chance-to-win-1000-trail-and-40-sbd

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Best one I've read so far. I loved the use of taste. Wondering now whether Maurice turns into another "squat tree" or a perhaps a more picturesque one. ;-)

And what does the tree who became a man feel like? Does he have tree feelings? Was he always a tree, or is he again the man that he was? Was there a tree man before him? What will happen if I eat an apple?

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