Warmth

in #fiftywords6 years ago (edited)

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Hiding like a coward between logs, blazing like a warrior, flashing red, exhaling black smoke.

Winter is here, dependent bodies huddled around, it breathes warmth.

Tomorrow it will be gone, ashes for blazing embers that today sit majestically in the center.

The fire feasts on woods, soldiers on its warmth.

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Welcome back, @iamthegray! This is very poetic. I love the rich imagery. (One editorial comment: be sure to add periods at the end of all sentences.)😊

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I'll make the corrections now

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@iamthegray I really like the last line! ((: creative spin to the prompt

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