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RE: Relief - A Fifty Words Story

in #fiftywords6 years ago

Oh ... it's the baby in the womb you are talking about. That's a really good idea!

I'd say the wish to stay inside is formed out of the retrospective of the adult ... a longing for a long forgotten real time experience but a maybe subconscious one. A protected world in which one wants to withdraw once in a while.

The happy tears of the parents the shocked cry of the baby. Many aspects in such a little text. Congrats to this accomplishment of yours.

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Thanks so much for those kind words @erh.germany. Very much appreciated... Glad you enjoyed the read..

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