50 word Story Contest Week #16 - The 16th CommandmentsteemCreated with Sketch.

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The 16th Commandment

Every journey begins with a single step, this one was a bit embarrassing. My gaze remained unfocused on the foot that had betrayed me.

"I tripped..." I mumbled shyly.

St. Peter sighed, "God, 'Never run with scissors' should've been the 16th Commandment!"

The gates opened and meekly I shuffled through.


Hope you enjoy this weeks entry! Threw in a minor Monty Python nod for fun. :)

As always I heard of the contest just by browsing a few weeks ago, this is my 4th week participating.

If you enjoyed the entry, check out my original story Crossroads. Just wrote chapter 3, so its not too late to get started with it! Links to the chapters are below.

Chapter One: https://steemit.com/fiction/@crossedsteems/crossroads-chapter-one
Chapter Two: https://steemit.com/writing/@crossedsteems/crossroads-chapter-two-where-am-i
Chapter Three: https://steemit.com/writing/@crossedsteems/crossroads-chapter-three-welcome-to-crossroads

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