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RE: A Rival / An entry for 50-word story challenge
This is such a well told story in the 50 word limit. You create a complex character, I had such a clear image of her waiting at the docks with her child, knowing that he would never love her as much as the sea. Such a relatable depth of emotion, sometimes you will never be enough, no matter how hard you try <3
Wow! You felt it just right, sensitive soul! I'm glad that I managed with my limited vocabulary ) thank you so much for all the words and emotions, Calluna )