Okay, I decided to change a few words so it’s hopefully no longer confusing. To stay within 50 words, I dropped one word and added one word. I also changed one other word. I think it should be clear now. I definitely want the story to make sense! Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Okay, I decided to change a few words so it’s hopefully no longer confusing. To stay within 50 words, I dropped one word and added one word. I also changed one other word. I think it should be clear now. I definitely want the story to make sense! Thanks for reading and commenting.