You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: #Fiftywords: Mother's Last Chocolate (Tiny Story)View the full contextavivakohen (48)in #fiftywords • 7 years ago so short but so powerful, it made me shiver. <3
Thanks, I tried to make it better... There was three words about death before. But I think writing "The day she died" at the beginning then not mentioning that again made it more powerful.