Fifty word story contest #20

asimplewriter (43)in #fiftywords • 7 years ago (edited)

I must act fast. The race of life or death is upon us. I fear I am closer to death. I can feel the burning cold fingers reaching for me. Creeping, creeping. I see her. This is no longer the race for life or death but a race for love.

I heard about this contest from literature-trails post.

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7 years ago in #fiftywords by asimplewriter (43)

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brandonh (57) 7 years ago

Well that is certainly concise. Congrats. I should try this challenge, but I'm such a windbag

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asimplewriter (43) 7 years ago

Yeah it's definitely difficult sometimes, to fit everything you want to say into such a small amount of words but I think you should give it a shot. Just remember to always remove unnecessary words. Good luck if you decide to give it a shot

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