Why the tears??
Tears meandered slowly down her face like glacial meltwater.
Was it something he said?
She wouldn't look up, her head bowed low in quite reverie.
Her gaze transfixed now and focused.
It ached every fibre of his six foot frame to see her this way.
She put down the onion...
In stark contrast to last week, this is my very early entry into @jayna's #fiftywords contest.
You should give it a go. It's great fun and we have a nice little community forming now.
The image is not mine and can be found here
Hope you like it.
Peace Out,
I love it! This one has a great punchline!
Ha ha. Why thank you :o)
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That was so funny. I like how well you were able to establish the mood with so few words, and then boom! The onion is introduced. Laugh out loud funny. 😊
He he... Thanks a lot. Great to have you reading and getting a laugh from my story :o)
I love the twist here, made me smile :) @ablaze
Delighted it brought a smile to your face @cizzo! Thanks for reading
Great story, @ablaze! Onion always brings tears into my eyes...it'a nasty character. 🙂
Thank you!! Yes, the onion is a villain! :o) He was my friend here though, by posing as my sneaky punchline.. ha ha
I loved this!! Never expected the last line, (though it would be bad if I expected it.) Good job!!
Shame it was past the payout when I read it... Haha.