Mouse - A Fifty Words Story

ablaze (61)in #fiftywords • 7 years ago (edited)

He was just shy of seven feet tall - a veritable man mountain.

With shovels for hands, he did the work of six men. His languid gait deceived, as he toiled tirelessly.

To see Mouse at full pelt was like watching nature's marvel at work, and he could always Stack enough...

That was my attempt to tell a story in just 50 words with the prompt of "Mouse"

Thanks for taking the time to read my story - I hope you enjoyed it. You can find some more of my stories here if you want to drop by some time.

A huge thanks to @jayna for organising this weekly - check out this weeks prompt page here.

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7 years ago in #fiftywords by ablaze (61)

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bid4joy (61) 7 years ago

You got a 22.79% upvote from @bid4joy courtesy of @ablaze!

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richardalom (49) 7 years ago

Thanks for sharing is very nice work

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ablaze (61) 7 years ago

Thanks very much for the comment, much appreciated

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tygertyger (65) 7 years ago

"to see mouse at full pelt " <Nicely played sir, nicely played :D

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ablaze (61) 7 years ago

Thanks a lot @tygertyger really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment..

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jayna (69) 7 years ago

Very nice. And this is a unique take on the "mouse" prompt!

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ablaze (61) 7 years ago (edited)

Thanks @jayna The image just popped into my head, and I went with it.. Mouse is like Boxer(Alexey Stakhanov ) in George Orwell's political allegory Animal Farm

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