DELETEDxanderslee (56)in #fiction • 7 years ago (edited)NOTHING #story #creativewriting #writing #prose
I loved the rhythm of your story, it had me hooked from start to finish @xanderslee
Thanks so much @cizzo! :D
I really like the direction you took with this, @xanderslee! It's a wonderfully imaginative take on a familiar story. I've finally submitted my own piece, and am catching up on reading the works by all the early pioneers! :-)
“Dad’s gone, kid,” said the man, his voice oddly soothing. Smooth like honey. Love this line. Great work!
Thanks, man! :D
Very original concept for such a generic picture!
@xanderslee,
You have taken me by surprise with this one. I like it, I like it a lot!
Thanks for the read!
@Lymmerik
Wow...l would love to join this too...l love writing..a good one of course