Hey @vinyprop, very well penned the common man's daily predicament. I see Paul as a father who is trying to make his son a disciplinarian and as a son who would do anything to save his dad. I am getting more inquisitive, to find out more to see how the characters you have been defining right from your first chapter would merge to form the core of your story. As they say "Curiosity killed the cat", I am waiting impatiently for your next plot. Keep it going.