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RE: The Allies of Old, Book Two Renewal: Chapter Five "Dazed and Confused"

in #fiction7 years ago

Anna is a loser for this one lol
The quote "With great power comes great responsibility" is far from her naive and high school like mind
She is constantly getting herself into trouble while she is drunk
I guess she won't learn until something crazy bad happens when she is in a stupor and can't focus her abilities to rectify a dangerous situation. Can't wait for the next chapter but I gotta! Great stuff my friend.

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Haha! Yes, actually the development of her character and especially maturity (and a couple of others as well) is something of a process, as is the case in actual life for people :) It is all the better when they do eventually become the better versions of themselves. I like her baseline, she is naturally giving and loving, but I don't like one dimensional characters, so she has to be balanced, at least for the moment, with thoughtlessness and carelessness as well. I'm embarrassed to say that many of her qualities are based on myself at that age, ha!
Thank you as always. The next chapter will be up tomorrow :)

You're most welcome, don't worry I can relate, looking forward to reading it! I am sure Anna will mature with great growth and finesse

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