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RE: Reborn: Chapter Twenty Nine "The Indestructible Fairy"

in #fiction8 years ago

When Will said she was a sweet little virgin vampire, that made me smile, but he is still forgetting to note that she is a fairy. It just sounds like a fiercely powerful combination. A near indestructible fairy indeed. Now they're going to be testing her capabilities on a more professional scale which is going to be a great set of scenes you'll be covering, i'm looking forward to that extremely. The moment with Will definitely wasn't intimate and you wrote it in such a neutral way for Anna that you stayed true to her feelings for Austin so your genuine care for your characters and their dynamic relationships really rings true and holds weight and consistency. Way to keep to the compassionate side my friend, this was another tightly knit beautiful chapter. So glad they accepted her into their team.

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