RE: Reborn: Chapter Thirty "A God Among Men"
When it comes to adding layers to characters, you truly show your skill. This was an easy read chapter and I felt like I was seeing life through Jared's perspective and how he views the chaos and hypocrisy of both his race and the humans he despises. I can already tell that he and Anna will be crossing paths more often with a bit of mysteriousness and intrigue from both sides. Also, maybe he will discover the two brothers to be genuine enough to reconsider his hope on humanity and that not all humans are these self-preserving, greed-driven tools of materialistic, recklessly dangerous and addictive-substance reliant nuisances. He has an ancient maturity about him, and I look forward to more insight from his inner thoughts as this story progress. Solid chapter my friend, Jared's presence resonates off the page
Your comments are awesome, this one especially made me grin. I love Jared, his character progression was the most challenging and rewarding to write.
Speaking of writing, contrary to popular opinion, it appears now is the time to be posting. My votes are adding anywhere between four and seven cents on low dollar posts, more on high dollar. My newest chapter broke two bucks with only twenty votes, I'd say this whale experiment it starting to show some interesting results.
Thanks for the heads up, and I love leaving you constructive and insightful feedback.
As far as my vote is concerned, it still is only giving 1 penny just like it always has at 100% and I don't up vote that often as most other people do. So I still don't understand this experiment. I've seen no differences unfortunately for me in particular, but if others do, that's a cool note to take into consideration, but I feel left out of the loop on this lol