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RE: Reborn: Chapter Fourteen "The Proposal"

in #fiction7 years ago

That was a sweet ending to the chapter, a bit heart wrenching indeed, but it's pretty agitating that she didn't tell Jenna about Jake's true identity. I'm sure that will unfold later on, but Anna is against all the odds going in alone, nice nice chapter my friend. If something bothers me, you're doing a great job creating tension and suspense :)

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