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RE: Best Served Cold--Original (unedited) Short Story
Nice footer image too.
Liked this piece. This line really stood out for me, just how it was structured:
Down it plummeted, smooth, silent, and horrifyingly accurate.
Perfect.
Could see it shimmering in my mind like some Computer Graphic simulation suddenly shoved into reality, large phong-shaded highlights dancing on the curved edges.
Tim, you're way too nice to me.