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RE: Everything for Beauty
You clearly haven't read my other stories. Nobody escapes death and a deus ex machina is usually the devil in disguise :D
No but I think it would take away from this story to have a twist like that and continue. I think it's more of a punch in the stomach if that's it.
Fair point, and unfortunately not, I've only had the pleasure of reading one of your posts previously. Thought I'd make a pitch for Daniela's continuation as a character, but as a fan of the short story form I have to say you really nailed this one. You're right, it's a more effective ending to leave it hanging like that. Will have to follow your stories more closely!