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RE: Guest house: Former Battlefield - Part 4

in #fiction • 7 years ago

You should try sticking to one tense while writing. In this story you're constantly jumping between present and past which has a negative effect on an otherwise good story.

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     7 years ago 

    Thank you for your feedback, @suesa. I will try to follow your advice.

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