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RE: Writers' Block Writing Contest Entry: "That Black Pen"
I'd never read any of your posts and I'm currently regretting I hadn't bumped into one earlier. I liked this a lot. Your storytelling is simply humbling.
I think one of the things I liked the most out of this piece was feeling connected to Allison. I could almost feel her desperation, see her hand grasping for the pen. Great.
Upvoted and followed!