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RE: Heart's a Mess (Short Story - Horror)
Absolutely fantastic use of language, it was just so evocative and atmospheric, every word was like a brush stroke painting an incredible picture.
Not sure if you picked up on it, but I loved this story :-)
That is high praise, and gratefully received. I toyed with this one for a while, trying to get the language right. To hear how it came across to you and the way you describe it like brush strokes (an effect I was aiming for) is music to my ears. Thank you.