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RE: The mistake of Jack - Chapter 3 - FICTION
I had to go back to read chapter 2, I missed it... This very well done. I like the way you build suspense- ending the chap at just the right time. I hope Jack is Ok!
Thanks for going back to read @richq11, luckily the chapters aren't too long. Thanks for the compliment.
Yes, I also wonder where Jack is and if he's ok? We'll find out soon, lol.
I guess you write like I do... When I sit down, I never have any idea what will happen until I pick up the "magic pen"