I loved this. You took events intertwined in a space of time, and you took yourself who is so completely a universe within a universe and you placed the whole of you into the creation, interpretation, and the giving of this incredible masterpiece of work. You have a unique way of telling stories. It Is a way that draws the reader into that world,and makes them feel some sort of way about the characters. And the most beautiful and masterful thing to me about this piece that consumed my mind was the tempo and timing of the story. I could feel myself inside of a world that took it's time. It was not in a hurry. And when we take time to smell the roses, really connect with the person sitting across from us and we don't just listen when that person speaks, but we hear what they say deeply and we also hear what they don't say. This pace allowed me, made me want to sit back and get to know the characters and I discovered how she felt about John with no "h" and how he felt about her. And I could just go on...It captured my attention completely and my heart. Thank you so much @authorofthings, just discovered you and I will be following.